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(FR) Day Jealousy in Equestria - Part 2

Aug 31st, 2013
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  1. better prose version: http://www.fimfiction.net/story/321821/2/jealousy/day-2
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  4. >Wake up.
  5. >HOLY SHIT! YOU ARE LATE FOR WORK!
  6. >Triple S at the speed of sound.
  7. >Maybe you shouldn't have wiped at the speed of sound.
  8. >No time for breakfast. Gotta get to Apple Acres now!
  9. >You aren't really hungry anyway. In fact, you kinda feel full.
  10. >If you are lucky and run fast enough you might not even run into...
  11. >Oh yeah. That's right. Fluttershy dumped you yesterday.
  12. >Wait. The fuck are you saying. You two weren't a thing.
  13. >Yet, when you open your door this morning, a part of you feels empty.
  14. *sigh* Better get used to this.
  15. >You walk off to work. Not really caring that you are late anymore.
  16. >Fluttershy seems to be plaguing your thoughts, or at least what little good memories you had of her plague your thoughts.
  17. >Maybe you shouldn't have been so mean yesterday.
  18. >Entering the Apple's farm, you decide that after work you will try to make things better with Fluttershy.
  19. >A hard day's work will be able to get your mind off of that douchebag for a little while.
  20. >"Great job Mous! Let's grab the next field."
  21. >Wait. What.
  22. >"Thanks Applejack. This job is a piece of cake! I'm just happy you can help me earn some bits."
  23. >"No problem partner. Thats what friends are for."
  24. "Hey Applejack. Mous."
  25. >You refuse to look at the only other human in this world.
  26. >"Bout time ya showed up sleepy head! Thank goodness ah got Mous here to help pick up the slack."
  27. "My bad. I had a rough night."
  28. >"That's a shame, cause my night was great. Didn't get too much sleep."
  29. "Why don't we just get to work."
  30. >Normally the hard work gets you enough of a workout, but today your head isn't in it.
  31. >By the time you clean out one tree, Mous completes two.
  32. "You are going to tire yourself out if you keep that pace."
  33. >"You kiddin me? I'm on easy mode."
  34. >A monkey couldn't swing from branch to branch faster than his speed.
  35. >He cleans out a tree almost as fast as Applejack bucks a fresh one.
  36. >Hours pass. You are exhausted and hungry.
  37. >Mous hasn't even broke a sweat.
  38. >"Well boys, payday! Come'ere Mous, I'll give you a bit of an advance so you can get started."
  39. >Advance?
  40. >"Thanks Applejack, see you tomorrow! Can't keep Shy waiting!"
  41. >He shoots a wink towards you.
  42. >You make a fist. Daring him to start something.
  43. >"Anon, ah think we need to talk."
  44. "Well, uh, okay Applejack. Whats up."
  45. >"It's about your performance the last few days. You aren't workin at your normal pace."
  46. "Sorry Applejack, I've just had a lot on my mind lately. I'll pick up the pace. I promise."
  47. >A lot is an overstatement.
  48. >The only thing on your mind right now is Fluttershy and making amends.
  49. >"Well, here's the problem partner. I can't keep two workers fer forever."
  50. >You lose your breath for a second.
  51. >"Ah know you've been here a long time, but ah need you to pull yourself together now."
  52. >You nod.
  53. >This is it.
  54. >"I'm gonna keep your pay for today, but that's because tomorrow is your last shot."
  55. >Mous is slowly trying to take everything dear to you.
  56. >"Y'all decide if it's yer last paycheck. Ah hope it won't be."
  57. >You won't let him.
  58. "I understand Applejack. I'll be on my A-game tomorrow."
  59. >"Thanks Anon."
  60. >You head back towards Ponyville, thinking out a plan for how to make amends with Fluttershy and keep your job.
  61. >Maybe Twilight would have some good advice?
  62. >Probably not. She is too busy trying to learn and experiment with her new princess powers.
  63. >There is always taking to Pinkie again.
  64. >Plus you should probably apologize about the cake yesterday.
  65. >But then again, you would hate to bother her with all of your troubles.
  66. >Rainbow Dash is at the Wonderbolt Academy this week, so that's out of the question.
  67. >Which leaves, Rarity.
  68. >You could go to her shop to get fitted with a new outfit, and ask for advice in the process.
  69. >It seems like a great idea.
  70. >But then again, she does love to pass around rumors. Could you really trust her?
  71. >Do you really have a choice?
  72. The Boutique it is.
  73. >*knock-knock*
  74. >"We're closed for today!"
  75. "Even for a friend?"
  76. >The door opens revealing the element of generosity with a wide smile.
  77. >"Oh Anon come in! Come in! What can I do for you? You so rarely visit, I'm guessing you need new clothes?"
  78. "Yeah if you don't mind, but I got something else I'd like to talk to you about too."
  79. >"Oh? Do tell. Do tell. Oh! I had this most magnificent idea for an outfit for you today. I've been experimenting with leather and denim and winter is coming up, so I thought I-"
  80. "It's about Fluttershy."
  81. >She becomes quiet, and continues to grab more materials from her workroom.
  82. >Maybe this wasn't a good idea.
  83. >She reenters the fitting room and begins drawing her ideas.
  84. >"Go on."
  85. "Well. I'm assuming that you heard about what happened yesterday."
  86. >"Which part Anon, you must be more specific. Could you get on the fitting platform? I'm almost done sketching this out."
  87. >You step onto the platform.
  88. "Well, about Fluttershy... losing interest in me."
  89. >"You mean breaking up with you."
  90. *Sigh* "Yes."
  91. >"Then you admit it."
  92. "Yes. Fine. We broke up."
  93. >"Good. That's the first step to recovery Anon."
  94. >These fucking ponies. Whatever. Just play along.
  95. "Well. I'm wondering if I should talk to her and try and make things better."
  96. >Suddenly a roll of denim, under Rarity's magic, wraps around your legs and begins to form a new pair of jeans.
  97. >"Why do you want to do that Anon?"
  98. "I've just been thinking and, well, maybe I was a little hard on her. I could have been better to her."
  99. >"Now are you doing this because she broke up with you, or because she is hanging around with Mous?"
  100. >Ouch. Rarity knew all the right questions.
  101. >"Shirt off please?"
  102. "Sure."
  103. >You take off your shirt to show off your muscled physique. Rarity blushes.
  104. >This will just take a second.
  105. >A roll of cotton wraps around your arms and midsection, magically sewing a new t-shirt.
  106. >"Well?"
  107. "A little of both honestly. I miss her being around all the time. I feel like I lost a good friend."
  108. >What the hell are you saying.
  109. >Remember when she pissed on your door to see if watersports were your fetish?
  110. >Remember when she shoved Twinkies up her asshole to see if shitting food was your fetish?
  111. >Remember how she would come to see you every day?
  112. >Remember when she gave you that hug the first day that you came to Equestria? When you needed moral support the most?
  113. >Remember how she always cared for you? Even when you got hurt due to her fetish attempts?
  114. >It was always her that took you to the hospital.
  115. >Wait! WHAT THE HELL.
  116. >"Are you sure you aren't just jealous?"
  117. "No! I'm not just jealous Rarity."
  118. >"It sounds to me like you might be jealous."
  119. >She wraps black leather around you, fitting for a leather jacket.
  120. >"This jacket is going to take a while to get done, since I haven't done one of these for a human. It'll be ready tomorrow morning."
  121. "I'm not jealous."
  122. >"If you aren't jealous, then go talk things through with Fluttershy, but if you are, stay away."
  123. "Fine. Thanks."
  124. >"I mean it Anon."
  125. >She stares bullets at you, and her once gentle voice now becomes hard and serious.
  126. >"I haven't seen Fluttershy this happy before. I don't want you to go breaking her heart or ruining her chances with Mous."
  127. >Ouch.
  128. >"At least he actually loves her."
  129. "Who said I didn't love her."
  130. >"You did. All the time. Every day."
  131. >The words burn on the inside.
  132. >Maybe she really did listen to you.
  133. >"It tore me up to listen to her cry. Every time about you not loving her as she did for you. I won't allow you to do that to her again."
  134. "Then I'm going to go set things straight."
  135. >"Remember my words Anon. Your jacket will be ready at 7am."
  136. "Great. Work isn't till 9, and it will be cold."
  137. >You head out the door
  138. "Thanks Rarity."
  139. >"I didn't do a thing Anon."
  140. "I know."
  141. >You jog towards Fluttershy's Cottage.
  142. >What are you going to say?
  143. >Guess you will figure that out when the time comes.
  144. >All that matters is setting things right.
  145. >When you approach the cottage the lights are on and the moon is starting to come out.
  146. >So much for getting a good night's sleep.
  147. >Before you knock on the door, you have one last chance to go back.
  148. >You stop and ponder leaving for a moment.
  149. >No fucking way.
  150. >*knock-knock*
  151. >The door immediately swings open to show an excited Fluttershy.
  152. >Your heart skips a beat.
  153. >"Oh thank goodness you are back Mous! I was beginning to get worried and-"
  154. >She cuts off her words when she sees your face and not Mous.
  155. >"Oh, hi Anon. Was there something you needed? Otherwise it's late... um... if you don't mind."
  156. >Your happy energy and confidence drain from you.
  157. "Yeah, um, I wanted to talk to you about something."
  158. >Her expression becomes exasperated and her tone angry.
  159. >"About what? I'm sorry Anon, but I thought you were the one that said they needed time."
  160. >This little pony sure knew how to verbally bitch-slap you.
  161. "I just. I feel like I'm the one that should apologize. I never really treated you right. You were so kind to me and only wanted to make me happy.
  162. >She stares at you expecting more.
  163. "... but I was an asshole. I kicked you off my doorstep, threw you out windows, made you face some of your worst fears-
  164. >"Humiliated myself."
  165. ".. yes, and humiliate yourself."
  166. >"Get to the point, Anon."
  167. >Now or never.
  168. "I just wanted to say I'm sorry and see if there was anyway we could return to normal?"
  169. >Her face begins to become pink.
  170. >And pinker... and pinker.
  171. >Oh wait. That might be the darkness playing tricks on you. Thats red.
  172. >"How dare you."
  173. >You take a step back.
  174. >"How DARE you!"
  175. >She flies in the air above you.
  176. >"I work hard for MONTHS to try and make you love me the way I loved you, and now when I finally found the special somepony of my dreams, you think you can walk over here on two legs and ask for me back!"
  177. >Time seems to freeze.
  178. >"How DARE you not think about what I may want. How DARE you ask for me back after everything I've done for you."
  179. >Guilt rises from your stomach to the back of your throat, destroying your ability to talk.
  180. >"Lastly.... How... How dare you..." *sniff*
  181. >Guilt turns to sadness as she fights crying.
  182. >"How dare you play with my emotions that way. Rarity had me convinced that you would never love me. I still tried so hard for you. I tried. SO. HARD."
  183. >You open your mouth, but words don't come.
  184. >"Now you come here, and play with my emotions like they are a filly's plaything! Even when I have somepony who really loves me."
  185. >She has nearly broken down into tears, she lands on the ground back inside the cottage.
  186. >"Well I'll put this in words I'm sure you will understand Anon."
  187. >She stares directly into your soul. For the first time, you see the deep gentle person deep inside her.
  188. >The person you loved.
  189. >The person you destroyed.
  190. >"We were never a thing."
  191. >The door slams in your face, and crushes all reality around you.
  192. >Only one other sound fills the space around you.
  193. >Fluttershy's deep sobs, which travel deeper into her house, until they are gone.
  194. >Only silence envelops you, the landscape only lit by the pale full moon.
  195. >You fall to you knees.
  196. >"Great job Asshole."
  197. >You turn around to see him.
  198. >"Now I'm probably not getting any tonight."
  199. >Your numbness intensifies, and thoughts and words become automatic.
  200. "You know what. Fuck you."
  201. >You get on your feet and walk towards the sack of shit.
  202. "If you really cared, you would be inside taking care of her right now."
  203. >"You;re right, and I'm right here. What do you think that means Anon?"
  204. "Fuck you."
  205. >"No thanks, but I'm sure I can tell you how I fucked her."
  206. "That is IT, asshole!"
  207. >"Hey buddy, you missed your chance. Now, it's my turn."
  208. >You charge towards him, fists extended, ready to destroy him.
  209. >A purple barrier separates you and him.
  210. "WHAT THE FUCK."
  211. >"Thank you for your tip Rarity."
  212. >"No problem Twilight. I'm going to head inside and see how she is doing."
  213. >No longer shrouded by night, Princess Twilight and Rarity emerge from the darkness.
  214. >Fucking unicorn magic.
  215. >"As for you two humans. I can't have you hurting each other. At least not this way."
  216. >You stare at the only pony keeping you from attacking your enemy.
  217. "Go on."
  218. >"I understand that you two are fighting to have the same job, same marefriend, and even the same residence from the mayor."
  219. >"Oh yeah, about that Anon. Did you get your eviction notice?"
  220. "FUCK YOU."
  221. >You pound as hard as you can against Twilight's purple barrier, but it only hurts your hand.
  222. >"I can allow you two to fight only on one condition."
  223. >You stare at her.
  224. >If looks could kill, she would be on fire.
  225. >"The loser must be subject to my new teleportation spell. It should return the loser to Earth."
  226. >Your answer is pure reflex.
  227. "I'm in."
  228. >You look to your opponent with murder in your eyes.
  229. >"I accept the challenge."
  230. >"Fair enough. I will see you two at 7:30am outside the library. Now go home Anon. Don't try anything funny."
  231. >You walk home. Never so determined about something in your life.
  232. >You will fight.
  233. >You will win.
  234.  
  235. >You are Fluttershy
  236. >You just finished drying your eyes with Rarity.
  237. >Twilight enters your cottage.
  238. "Did... Did he?"
  239. >"Yes."
  240. >You look to the floor.
  241. "Were is Mous?"
  242. >Twilight sighs deeply.
  243. >"He will stay with me tonight."
  244. "I hope he wasn't too hard on Anon."
  245. >"He said what he needed to. I heard it all. Anon will be there, and he is going to fight hard."
  246. "I don't know if I want this Twilight."
  247. >Rarity and Twilight look at you questioningly
  248. "I just... I just don't want Anon to get hurt."
  249. >Twilight nods to you and smiles.
  250. >"You should have seen him out there tonight. He almost knocked down my barrier. I think he will be fine."
  251. "That's good. I think I better get some sleep girls. It's going to be a hard night."
  252. >You see your friends out of your cottage and head upstairs to bed.
  253. >Getting under the covers, you look to where Mous laid last night.
  254. >He wasn't Anon, but he was nice, and wasn't so difficult.
  255. >You weren't really even interested in Mous. He didn't feel genuine. You just imagined he was Anon.
  256. >He was cold, and distant. Not like your Anon.
  257. >You just hope that this ordeal turns out alright.
  258. >You hope it turns out as you have hoped.
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