[Cancelled] (FR) Remember Me - Part 1 (Edited and Fixed)

After over a month of editing and fixes, I have to just get this out here. I do plan on continuing this, but this first part is what I'm going to use as the first part. Hope you enjoy this version.
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>Wake up
>Where the fuck are you?
>Bolt upwards.
>You scan the room.
>Where ARE you?
>Golden light begins to shine through an open window in the room.
>Guess it's time to get up.
>Find bathroom.
>Shit on a tiny toilet
>Crouch during your shower
>Shave with a mini-razor.
>At least it's a good shave.
>Why is everything so fucking small.
>Forget it. Too hungry for this shit.
>Go downstairs
"OW! Shit!"
>Hit your head on the low ceiling.
>Sigh.
>Find the kitchen and manage to find cereal.
>Setting your breakfast on the table, you notice something.
>There is a piece of paper on the table.
>After examining it, the letter is addressed to you.
"Great. More weird stuff."
>Tear it open.
>"Anon, if you are getting this message, it's because something went wrong and you lost your memory. I'm writing this letter in the past in case this happens. Welcome to our home."
>"We were attempting to return home to our original planet, using a magical spell that I found. If you have this, we think that there is probably no way back."
"Okay. Great. I'm an alien."
>"You have been living in the land of Equestria for about one year now. You currently work for the Equestrian ruler's apprentice, Twilight Sparkle, as her research aide in the nearby city of Ponyville. She is the one who returned you to your home, assisted you with the spell and left this note. I told her not to read it, and I trust that she didn't. Please understand that this note is for your eyes only."
>You slump into the chair and hear it squeak in agony.
"Ugh. I can't stand this house. I must be cheap or something."
>"Your main friends consist of Twilight, Pinkie Pie, Rarity, Rainbow Dash, and Applejack. All of them are great friends and will do whatever they can to help you get your memory back. Twilight should have arranged a meeting today at 12pm. Try to gage the time based on where the sun is in the sky."
>You look outside to see the sun just rising over the horizon. It must be about 7am.
>"However there is another thing you should know. You have another friend. A very close one who knows everything about you. Her name is Fluttershy, and I can tell you that she loves you very dearly, and you, or well I love her very much.
>Sweet. I have a girlfriend.
>"Take a look at the attached photo."
>You look under the note to see a photo of you with your arm wrapped around a small yellow horse. Both of you appear to be having a great time at a park, and it's annotated 'Anon and Fluttershy' with a little heart.
"...what?"
>"About now you are realizing that this is a pony. In this world everyone is a pony. You will have to get over this quickly so you don't worry the other citizens."
>Stop and take a deep breath. Ponies? Really?
>"Anyway, Fluttershy is going to have a very tough time with your amnesia. I can verify that much of what she will say is true, but I worry for your safety around her. She acted very strangely while you were attempting to return home. She may attempt to mislead or condition you, since she never wanted me to return home."
>"What I will tell you is that the moment you arrived, all you wanted to do was return home. You have a life there waiting for you, and she knows this. I'm sure that your family and friends miss you dearly. "
>"If you decide that you want to stay here for forever, there is one more note that I would like for you to read. The note is in your home hidden somewhere she will not able to find."
>"Good Luck. Anon. I hope you can find a way to be happy."
>Below that, you read at the bottom.
>You stare blankly at the letter, trying to absorb everything you just told yourself.
>Or what you think is you anyway.
>How would you know?
>Who are you?
>You try not to think about it as you take in your surroundings. A simple living quarters with a conjoined dining and entertainment space.
>There were books scattered all over the house. Some of them left open on certain pages with notes. Others were in a language you didn't understand.
>Where was that other note?
>After a searching the house, a few tiny bowls of cereal, being assaulted by more doorways, and memorizing the note, it appears to be about 9am.
>The rest of the house is filled with pictures and more books.
"The yellow one is in almost all these pictures.
>One picture has you, the yellow one and five other ponies.
>After examining the photo, the back has the names from the note on it.
>Better keep this one handy.

>A quiet, unsure knock at the door.
>You approach the door and open it.
>Look down to meet eyes with a yellow pony with cyan eyes, pink hair with a look of pure shock on her face.
>"A-Anon? Is that really you?"
"Uh... I think so? You are..."
>Remember. The picture.
"Fluttershy... right?"
>She looks dejected and her eyes fall to the ground.
>"You don't remember... do you."
>Silence. Words don't seem to exist any more.
>"D-Do you?" she stutters out.
>Tears begin to moisten the dry ground.
>She looks up at you, expecting an answer, disappointment written across her face.
"All I know is when I woke up, I didn't really remember anything."
>Her eyesight meets the ground again.
>You remember the note, but you can't show her. Not now anyway.
>You need to know you can trust her.
>Think fast.
"However, I did find this on my bed-stand with our names on it."
>Smoothly pull out the photo that was with the note.
"I guess you must be really important to me then. Why else would it be there?"
>"Oh Anon!"
>She flies up to you and gives you a tight hug.
>"I just knew you wouldn't go! I just knew it! I knew you wouldn't leave me!"
>You will need a dryer shirt before you go.
>Your arms hold her closely and she breaks into happy sobs.
>The moment passes and she calms herself down.
>"How much do you remember Anon?"
"I'm not really sure what I'm supposed to know."
>"I'll make sure we get all those gaps in your memory filled in. We have so many memories to recreate. Oh it will be so romantic." she exclaims.
>She lets go after a little bit and smiles widely.
>Damn she's cute.
>"Let me go feed my animals and I'll see you at the library at noon. Bye-bye sweetie!"
>She flies off, singing a happy tune.
"Wait! Where is that!"
>She must not have heard you.
"Damn it."
>Heading back inside, you pull out the note again.
>"I worry for your safety around her."
"How could such a cute pony be dangerous? That seems ridiculous."
>Looking at the picture puts butterflies in your stomach.
>What should I believe?
>You put the note in your room, and place it at the bottom of a dresser full of clothes.
>Clothes. Human clothes.
>Wait a Minute. Where did I get these? Where is the tag?
"There it is. Carousel Boutique... I'll have to stop there. They should know me."
>Taking a look outside, you decide you probably should head to the library, it's almost 11am now.
>Time to head towards Ponyville.

>"Hi Anon!" waves a blue pony.
>"How's it hangin Anon!" comes from another.
>The citizens of Ponyville are a very friendly bunch as you head into town.
>Must not be hard to remember you when you are the only human.
>Maybe you should ask where the library is.
>Stroll around town, trying to get a sign of where you destination is.
>Thank god for signs along the roads.
>You reach the library at 12:15 and knock on the door.
>"About time!" yells someone from inside.
>The door swings open to reveal a flying blue pony with a rainbow mane.
>"What took you so long!" barks the flying pony.
>"Well maybe if you helped him get here like I asked, he would have got her sooner." says an annoyed voice from inside.
"Sorry, I got a little lost I guess." You say with a chuckle.
>"Well don't just stand there! Get in here." Says the blue pony, pulling you inside.

>As you enter, confetti, balloons and streamers fly through the air.
"Huh?"
>A pink pony with wild hair is handing out party hats to everyone.
>The purple pony gives her a stern look. "Pinkie. This isn't a party, this is serious."
>"Oh! Hehe! Sorry Twilight."
>Two yellow hooves wrap around your shoulders from behind, and pink hair cradles your neck.
>Butterflies again.
"Hey Fluttershy."
>She giggles.
>You turn to the other three ponies.
"Then you three must be..."
>You look at the rainbow maned pony.
"Rainbow Dash..."
>"The one and only!"
>"Thank goodness fer that!"
>What's THAT supposed to mean?"
>Those are apples on the orange one's flank.
"And you must be Applejack."
>"That's me alrigh!"
"Which means you must be Rarity."
>"That's right darling."
>"Does this mean you are beginning to remember things Anon?" Asks Twilight.
"Well... I'm afraid not. I'm just using some of the things around my house as context clues."
>You show them the photo of everyone.
>"Oooohh! I remember that day! We had a picnic, went swimming, told funny jokes. OOH, and Spike got the hiccups and began sending everyone's stuff to Celestia!"
>"I remember that day too." Fluttershy says in a happy tone.
>"Ah remember that sunburn that Rarity got!"
>Everyone but Rarity smiles and laughs a little.
>"Ha, Ha. See if I give YOU sympathy next time you get burnt out in the apple farm."
>Twilight clears her throat.
>"Well Anon, given the situation I did some research, and there isn't much information regarding memory loss that isn't a memory charm or natural amnesia."
"I see... is there anything that can be done about my memories? Is there anything I can do to get them back?"
>The atmosphere becomes much more tense.
>The grip around your shoulders becomes a little tighter.
>"So far... I don't know. We weren't really supposed to be combining spells like that, especially spells from the Canterlot Archives. I'm not even sure if it's safe to try a counterspell at this point."
"I see. So then... is there any hope at all?"
>Silence
>"Well... let me send a letter to the princess. She may have an idea of what we should do. I'll be scolded for performing something so dangerous, but if it will help you get your memories back it will be worth it."
"Thank you."
>"In the mean time, I want you to take a week off work."
"What! No! I want to figure out how to how to get my memories back as soon as possible."
>"What you need, Anon, is to become re-adjusted to life in Ponyville. You had trouble adjusting to life the first time around, and I have a feeling it could be just as hard this time."
>Sigh
"I guess you have a point. I have no idea how things work here. I will need to learn how to properly take care of myself here.
>"I'll do everything I can to find a way to get your memory back, as long as it doesn't interfere with my studies too much."
>"Ah'll help ya down at the market. Some of the stalls will make a run fer yer money, and ya'll need to learn to barter."
>"I'll make sure that you don't dress yourself like a barbarian, and have proper manners."
>"I'll show you the ropes around here in Ponyville. I know the fastest routes to everywhere!" Rainbow says confidently.
>"If you ever feel sad or lonely, you can trust me to rush there to make you smile!" Pinkie exclaims excitedly.
>"I'll be here to help you with anything else you may need Sweetie. We all care about you and want to make sure you are happy." Coos the quiet pegasus.
"Thank you everyone. You have no idea how much this means to me. So, I guess I have a few questions."
>You ask about the differences between the different pony races and how Equestria was made.
>Fluttershy enthusiastically talks about the animals in Equestria while Twilight explains how magic and cutie marks work.
>You learn about Equestrian cuisine and culture from Rarity.
>Rainbow Dash talks about how the weather works and Equestrian sports. Especially about the Wonderbolts.
>If you try to learn one more thing, your head is going to burst.
"Thanks everyone. My head is starting to kill me. I think that's all I'm going to be able to take for today."
>Twilight nods.
>"That's understandable. I mean it is your first day. Just be sure that if you need anything to come running, and we will help however we can."
>The group nods in agreement.
>"Well, I better head back to Carousel Boutique. Who knows what sort of mischief Sweetie Bell must be up to."
>"Same here partner. Ah better round up Applebloom and git back to the farm. We got some apples to gather for cider season before the sun goes down. See ya later Anon"
>"I better go help the cakes for their biiig catering order for tomorrow. See ya later Nonny!"
>The three ponies exit the library and you turn to Twilight.
"Thank you for all of this Twilight. I can't thank you enough for... well... all of this. I'm still not sure what to make the situation."
>"Well you weren't too easy to carry back to your home. So consider it a one-time deal."
>The two of you chuckle.
"Yeah I guess. Well, I think I'm going to explore town for a little bit. Try and get some bearings and try to remember something."
>"Yeah Anon, let's have a nice evening stroll."
>"Alright. Sounds fair. If you ever need anything, feel free to talk to me or any our fiends. We are here for you."
"Thanks!"
>You turn to leave the library and head towards the door.
>"Anon.. One more thing."
>You turn to see Twilight with a sad, but serious look.
>"I'm sorry. I didn't mean for things to turn out this way. Same goes for you Fluttershy."
"It's fine. I... I think I can do this."
>Fluttershy nods at Twilight.
>You give her the best fake smile you can give before walking out.
>TS:"Oh! Fluttershy." She says while grabbing a book off the shelf with magic. "Can I ask you something in private?"
>Fluttershy gives you a worried look.
"Don't worry. I'm not going anywhere. I'll just be outside."
>She gives you a warm smile as you leave.

>It's almost 6:30.
>Staying within close distance of the Library, you begin pacing.
>What am I going to do.
>You try to make sense of everything that has happened so far, as well as remember everything that they told you.
>You could probably hold a decent conversation with a stranger, but you wouldn't be passing a citizenship test any time soon.
>You sit on a park bench in the center of town, taking in the scenery.
>At least the view is relaxing.
>You take a deep breath, close your eyes and try to clear you mind.
>Even then she is there, in the back of your mind.
>Her innocent smile and gentle voice make you feel warm, safe and secure.
>You can even imagine the sound of her voice.
>"I'm back Anon. Did you miss me?"
>Yeah, it would sound just like that.
>She seems so nice and caring for you. Maybe it would be a good idea to just ride the wave for awhile and not worry about the past.
>"Anon? Are you okay? Can you hear me?"
>But then again, there has got to be some reason why I wanted to go back. What if there really are people waiting for me?
>Maybe I should just try to play it safe. Don't get too hasty, and don't make any rash decisions.
>You feel a warmth press against your lips.
>You open your eyes to see Fluttershy giving you a deep kiss.
>She pulls away with concern in her eyes.
>"Are you okay?"
"Yeah... I think so."
>"Good. Now then. How about I treat you to dinner then?"
>Seems safe enough. Even sounds like a date.
>Maybe today won't be terrible after all.
"Yeah sure! I don't think I have any money right now, so I would really love that. I probably wasn't going to eat anything for a while anyway."
>Her face furrows with annoyance.
>Her attitude completely shifts from concern to exasperation.
>"That's it mister. How many times have I told you that you can't work yourself so hard like that! It's not good for you and you will hurt yourself!"
>The little pony grabs you by the arm and pulls you from the bench.
>Strong for such a little pony.
>"I'm making you dinner and you will relax and take care of yourself! You just lost all your memories, and you STILL are a workaholic."
"But I was going to—"
>"Don't you 'But I' me! I'm going to take care of you and that is final."
>She begins to fly towards her cottage, pulling you along at a pace equivalent to jogging.
>She has a look in your eyes that you feel like you've seen before.
>You can't place where though.
>You lock on to the scent of flowers as you near her cottage, just on the outside of what the ponies called the Everfree Forest.
>She opens the door to her cottage and lets go of you on her sofa. It's probably big enough to sit three ponies, but you take up at least half of it.
>"Now stay there while I make something for you."
"But I—"
>She turns and looks at you with a fire in her eyes.
>"Stay!"
>You feel compelled to obey.
>The consequences of not following what she says could be unbearable.
>She watches you for a few seconds, then relaxes.
>"Good. Now stay there while I make us something special."
>She smiles widely and then strolls into the kitchen, humming to herself.
>Her home is very warm and inviting.
>A few birds sing songs and fly about the room, and squirrels chew on acorns.
>Animals run excitedly towards you, but upon approach, slow and sniff you.
>They give you curious looks and tilt their heads.
>A bunny hops towards you and examines you a dirty look.
"Hey there little guy."
>The animals take a few steps back, unsure of their visitor.
>A delicious smell emanates from the kitchen, and the animals instinctively head for their dinner.
>You walk into the kitchen to see Fluttershy setting out feed for the animals.
>"Now now, everyone will get dinner. No fighting."
>You are surprised at how well tempered the animals are.
"You really have a gift for these animals Fluttershy."
>Her face turns a bright pink.
>"Oh thank you. I just love my little friends. I want to make sure that they are well taken care of."
>She moves back to the stove and puts the meal on two plates.
>Bringing you both plates of food, she sits down unsure of what to say.
>Silence
>The two of you eat in silence, and she can't take her eyes off you.
>At least until you look up at her.
>Looking back down at your plate, you decide maybe you should start the conversation.
>This meal is truly fantastic.
"This is really good Fluttershy."
>"Oh, well, it used to be your favorite when you... lived here with me."
>She gives you another wide grin, and you return the smile.
"Thank you, you've really been so kind to me. I just don't understand why I was trying to leave here."
>The grin quickly fades from her face.
>"Anon."
"Yeah?"
>"Please don't talk about that... and please don't talk about that spell, or Earth."
"Oh... okay... was there something—"
>"Please."
"Well alright then, I—"
>"Promise me, Anon."
>You look up from your plate to see her looking directly at you, her body trembling, and tears welling in her eyes.
>You sit there for a moment... trying to understand.
>You take her hoof.
"I promise."
>She lets out a big sigh, and a tired smile.
>"I'll be right back."
>She flutters out of the room.
>You try to make sense of what just happened.
>Suddenly you aren't quite so hungry anymore.
>The animals are staring at you. Some are angry, some are curious.
>The bunny hops after Fluttershy.
>You look outside to see it getting dark out.
>You also have zero clue where your house is from here.
>Fluttershy knows... looks like she is your only option.
>You stand up and walk around the house a little bit, trying to find Fluttershy.
>Maybe you should apologize... you might have struck a nerve.
>Especially since she is the only one who knows how you should get home.

>You hear quiet sobs coming from a room down the hallway.
>As you walk down, you see Fluttershy crying on her bed, cradling a picture frame.
"Fluttershy?"
>"Why can't you just remember us Anon!"
>You stand there in silence.
>She moves towards you and notions you into the bedroom.
>Pictures of you and Fluttershy are on the dresser, hanging on the wall, On the night stand.
>In them you are hugging, smiling, kissing, or just having fun with your other friends.
>"Look at these! All of these pictures! Remember for me Anon! Please!"
>Tears stream down her face. Her eyes are bloodshot. She is a complete mess.
"Fluttershy..."
>"Call me Flutter again! Or Shy or any of the names you used to whisper to me... Please... Let's go back to the way it all was... before you found the spell... before you could go back. Love me Anon.."
>She buries herself into your chest. Covering you in snot and tears.
>You have no idea what to do. You stroke her mane gently trying to figure out your next move.
>"Why do you want to leave me!?!"
"I... I don't know."
>"Tell me. Remember! Remember for me.... please"
"I wish I knew Fluttersh- I mean.. Flutter. I wish I knew. I want to know for you."
>"Then you do love me?"
>You sit there as her hopeful eyes stare deeply into you. Intensely waiting her answer."
>Do you lie and make her happy? Do you be honest? You can't remember a thing.
"I..."
>Tears begin steaming down her face again, as her will begins to shatter in your arms.
>Then, she stops.
>Silence.
>"I know what to do."
>She pushes you onto the bed.
"Fluttershy... Wh-"
>Her face is serious and focused.
>"I'll make you remember. I'll make you remember everything."
>She leaps on top of you and presses her lips firmly against yours.
>The bunny hops out the door with a disgusted look.
>Your eyes open wide in shock.
>Her eyes are closed as her tongue works its way to yours.
>You try to push her away but she pushes you back down.
>"This is for your own good Anon."
"Fluttershy, please-
>"No! You have to remember! Remember us. Remember our love!"
>She kisses you again, more firmly and determined this time.
>You don't know what to do. You hardly know this mare... but you two used to be lovers.
>Do you just take her word for it? Is she telling the truth?
>The scent of flowers surrounds you.
>Something feels right, but at the same time, very very wrong.
"Fluttershy... stop."
>"No."
"Stop."
>"No!"
"Stop it!"
>"NO!"
>She covers your mouth with her hoof.
>Tears continue down her face.
>"Remember me."
>Her kisses continue down to your waist and unbuttons your pants.
>She begins to kiss your member on the outside of your pants, slowly causing it to become erect.
>You plead for her to stop, but it only comes out as mumbles under her hoof.
>Fluttershy pulls down your pants and places your member into her mouth.
>The wet, warm sensation feels amazing, but its so wrong.
>You don't want this.
>Your muffled voice can't break her out of this trance.
>Her tongue begins wrapping around your member, shooting waves of pleasure through your body.
>You need to get out of there.
>It feels too good.
>Right as you are nearing climax, you desperately try a new tactic.
>You yell with all your might into her hoof.
"I remember!"
>She stops.
>She flies up to eye level and holds you close.
>"I knew it! I knew it would work! Oh sweetie, I'm so happy."
>You let out a sigh of relief.
>Thank god.
>At least it's over.
>"Sweetie.."
"Yeah?"
>"Tell me what you said, the night before you left. Tell me again."
>Your mind goes blank as you ponder your next move.
"I... uh..."
>A frown appears on her face.
>"I'll just have to try harder."
>She places her marehood above your throbbing member.
"No, please, don't do this."
>"You have to remember!"
"Please! Stop!"
>"Love Me Anon!"
>She slowly begins to lower her flank over you.

>A knock on the door stops her short.
>This is your chance.
>You sprint towards the front door, pulling up your pants in the process.
>You rip the door open, to see a shocked Twilight.
>"Anon?"
>Ignore her and just run.
>Following the path, you sprint as fast as you can.
>When you enter Ponyville, a burning sensation pulses through your legs.
>In the distance, you see the library as you ponder a potential hiding spot
>Too obvious.
>Pushing harder, you consider more potential hiding places.
>You see a store up ahead that looks like the tag on your clothing.
>With a strong final push, you continue running to the little store.
>Kick the door open and slam it shut.
>Scrambling your hands along the door frame, you discover that there is no lock.
>You lean against the door and quickly scan the windows in the room.
>It doesn't look like you were followed.
>Catching your breath is one of the hardest things you've done all day.
>The dark room is only accentuated by the pale moonlight that fades in through the store windows.
>Scrunching into a ball against the door, you resist the urge to break down.
>You feel so violated, so dirty.
>However there is another feeling you can't shake, one you can't put your finger on yet, but its strong, and it makes you hate yourself what you just did.
>The inner turmoil is too much as you quietly sob into your knees, and letting sleep take hold of your quiet, tired body.